In my re-imagining of “Blue,” the Prologue’s transformation went slick as a whistle. Grins all around.
Unfortunately, my OCD has kicked up a fuss over the introductory paragraphs in Chapter One. A big, curse-ridden fuss.
So, please, pardon the new bald spots in my ‘do, as I yank out my hair one darn introductory sentence at a time.